Life

6:35:00 PM

Rising

With the wisp of smoke

Falling

With every rain drop

Breaking

Like china on the floor

Ringing

The bell of hope's door

Helpless

There's no one to call

This life

Full of rise and fall!

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3 Comments

  1. i love the flow of the poem, but a bit of constrictive criticism the last line.. doesn't go with it feels odd! But beautiful poem nonetheless!

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  2. thanks alot and totally agree with you i read the poem like 5 times already ... and i think that should be removed =) !!

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  3. you mean expensive china?

    I hope not

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