Innocence

12:50:00 PM

Shooting stars broke her heart, sunset made her cry. Innocent as a baby cuddling up in her mother’s arm. Suppressed by her childish fear, the wounds which she saw on her mother's heart made her so vulnerable. Yet the purity in her soul gave her strength to go miles alone. Kindness her virtue, truth her existence. Her eyes like sunset, waiting to kill the darkness with the shining light beneath their innocence. Skin as soft as velvet and lips as red as a blooming rose. Her voice sweet as a bird singing in the rain. Confident, with an aim in her mind, to actually be someone, to fulfill the expectations of all the people who cared. But then, she too fell in love.....

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9 Comments

  1. "Her eyes like sunset..." Is that why "...sunset made her cry"?

    "But then, she too fell in love....." Which means falling in love takes away innocence?

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  2. Fit yar... the best thing written by u in a while.. :P hahah.. nhi baki theek thay... Btw i may use some of these lines but will give u credit...

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  3. Just beautifullllll ..... poignant and pure... loved it ubee.God bless!!

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  4. That was pretty beautiful in a gloomy way... loved it.

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  5. One can already recognize 'fakeness and cruelty' long before falling in love.

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  6. I have to disagree, because unless you live in a very protective environment, you'll experience fakeness pretty soon. The 'dhoka from a lover' part only adds more pain to the fakeness, which you have had already experienced elsewhere, but only because this one hurts more than the rest.

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  7. its the purity find in one's soul that pushes you to go in life :)

    Nicely worded

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  8. oyee i didn't know u posted this here too :P but here it doesn't have a dedication *shakes head*

    veryyy nicely written as i've already mentioned *sigh* beautiful!

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