Gloomy weather

8:11:00 PM

I've been driving for an hour, Just talking to the rain.... You said I had been driving you crazy and that is what was keeping us away. So just give me one good reason today, tell me why I should stay? Cause I dont wanna waste another moment in saying things which i never meant to say. I Take it just a little bit, I, hold my breath and count to ten. I've been waiting for a chance to let you in... And today its the perfect day when i should express, what i was urging to say for months now. Yes, i was the one, who made you go away, the one who terminated every single method of communication. And again i am the one who is expressing his heart out. I did miss you alot, every single breath of mine did want to call you, wanted to hear your voice or to just know that you are ok. But call it my foolishness, or childish behavior that i couldn't understand what i was suppose to be doing, and what i did. I do regret, yes i am saying it... I do regret what i did, but it was your fault as well that you let me go so easily, if you had just called out to me once i would have returned and you even know that i would have. I don't think there is any use to recall what happened and what not, I just want to wish you happy anniversary today, and to tell you that i still exist. I still remember each and every day and time which i spent with you. While standing here alone am whispering in this gloomy dark and depressing weather, Hoping you to hear me... Do you hear me? Let my emotions fill the space between us.....

Well wrote this for my really good friend he wanted to say something to her friend who is no longer with her but he had no words so i helped him out a little

P.s . . . Post written and published from mobile so errors and omissions expected along with poor formatting . . .

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  1. as long as the feelings fall in place, all is just PERFECT!

    the pain is perfect!

  2. reminds me of something similar...luckily r unluckily I dont have regrets that I didn't try enough but grudges...hell...they hurt just as much if not more...and there's no way out u'know....... kher o.o

  3. breathe by mitchelle branch.... if i aint wrong....?

  4. if i just breathe every little piece of me.... you'll see.... everything is over..... breathe .... let it fill the space between... if i just.... breathe....

  5. Nice one :) Perfectly expressed

  6. Formatting may be poor, but the words are rich.


    Beautifully written.


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